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Wednesday, May 21, 2025

pitch feedback



Based on the feedback I have been given, I am going to do the following:

1- Reconsider my second cover as I am not sure it 100% meets the brief. I will move the focus away from beauty and make sure to have fashion as the main aspect of the cover. 

2- I am going to re-think about my 30 second clip and make sure it is different to that of vogues '73 questions'.





 

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