NEA FINAL DRAFT

WEBSITE:     https://19-gbur.wixsite.com/hauteur

COVER 1:

 COVER 2:

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This lesson I added an outfit breakdown to my website- I am going to make it so that you can click on purchase and it will take you to the product. 

Additionally, I experimented with different colour palettes for one of the pages on my website. I have decided the third down is the best and matches my black and white, minimalistic colour scheme. 

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I have added a subscriber pop up as you first access the website. This is an interactive element that follows website conventions. 

NEA constructive criticism feedback and plan of action

 

Plan of action:

Through my constructive advice from both my teacher and my peers I have highlighted what I need to do in the next coming weeks in order to improve and heighten my work. I will aim to complete the following:

Magazine:

1- I need to play around with fonts and insure that all the fonts are the same on my front covers. This should make the covers a lot cleaner and easier on the eye.

2- I am going to also experiment with different colours especially on my second cover as I am unsure the pink tone is fully effective. 

3- I am going to remove the shadow from the second cover and also get rid of the line on the right hand side of my first cover. 

4- I need to add barcodes to each cover to ensure I am ticking off all the conventions. 

5- For my content pages- I need to work on proportions and ensure everything is lined up correctly.

Website:

1- After Mr Escotts feedback, I need to change the first page of pictures as they clash in context and overall aesthetic. This will require me to shoot more content over the half term. 

2- I am going to shoot more content to include more content to the website. 

First Draft

Website:

https://19-gbur.wixsite.com/hauteur

Magazine Covers:

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I have added some of the possible cover lines I could use. I think I am going to change the fonts around and make some elements bigger to ensure they stand out. 

 

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I have created a collage of outfits from 'Paris fashion week' which I think create a nice visual appeal.